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Leo thee Lemon's avatar

I like to know how people feel when they write. What emotion sparked this output.

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Another great poem (yes I’m binging your writing right now)

I love this idea how language and art can also be a home. Especially when our own world isn’t what we thought it could be.

“I closed my eyes to see” I love that metaphor. I do this as well. It’s like a stand in for letting the inside guide the outside. Intuition? I’m not sure what it’s called. closing the eyes to see is better.

This is a really strong and dense poem Dorie. I admit I had to read it many times to understand what you are saying with such beautiful language. And still I feel I haven’t grasped it in its entirety. You write so damn well.

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