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I love this. The turn in the 2nd poem puts the first in a different context. Also the brevity really allows for multiple re reads so I can sort of enjoy how it sounds say it.

Makes me think that good poetry can also be short. Bc it can be savored more.

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Beautiful poem! Sad, tender, human. But also somehow resilient and promising strength.

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