This felt like a soft little vow wrapped in gentle courage. I love how it asks without ever pressing. And the Chinese version gives it an extra glow — like saying the same promise twice just to make sure the heart hears it.
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This is beautiful, Dorie. There’s such a quiet sincerity in it. I really enjoyed this.
A vulnerable moment when love is still honest and gentle. Thank you Andrea
Love both the English and Chinese versions ❤️
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This felt like a soft little vow wrapped in gentle courage. I love how it asks without ever pressing. And the Chinese version gives it an extra glow — like saying the same promise twice just to make sure the heart hears it.
Thank you for reading and your kind lovely words. I like that very much, I’m going to remember that. “Asks without ever pressing.”
Lovely n lively poem 👏👏👌🌻
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You're most welcome 🤗 🤗
There's a graceful plea in this, a plaintive supplication in the offer of earnest companionship
Thank you for reading! @PancakeSushi your comments and support mean a lot to me. I wrote this months ago for someone who needed a love letter for his beloved.
Ah, you played Cyrano for a hapless soul, who couldn't express what they wanted to themselves. Somewhere that makes the story more charming
Thank you so very much! I appreciate you reading.
Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate your kind words. Yes it is a very gentle and sincere plea for love.