this feels like light tiptoeing so it doesn’t wake the moment. two languages, one soft glow, hands learning where to rest. gentle but confident, very much like you, Dorie, like the kiss already knew where it was going.
I really loved this, Dorie. It feels so soft and warm. It has that calm, glowing feeling that makes you pause and breathe. I really enjoyed it. Beautiful words as always. Thank you for sharing.
These require a lot more work. I have to match the Chinese tones as well as balance meaning in specific phrases. It’s not a direct translation. Actually sounds better and means more in the original Chinese. 🩷
I can really feel the glow and brightness!
This is very tender … and quietly confident.
There’s such softness here, but it isn’t fragile. It glows because it’s held, not because it’s loud…
Thank you for this.
Thank you for this beautiful comment. You are truly appreciated. I’m going to hold onto this today🩷
Excellent Dorie,love this 🫶
Thank you Hina🩷
Loved this! ❤️❤️
Thank you🩷
“Golden rays, soft and bright,”
this feels like light tiptoeing so it doesn’t wake the moment. two languages, one soft glow, hands learning where to rest. gentle but confident, very much like you, Dorie, like the kiss already knew where it was going.
I was playing around with characters and tones. It worked out well🩷
I really loved this, Dorie. It feels so soft and warm. It has that calm, glowing feeling that makes you pause and breathe. I really enjoyed it. Beautiful words as always. Thank you for sharing.
I’m so happy you liked it.🩷
Just so perfect. I love nothing more than a sweet and short poem. This was my cup of tea!!
Thank you so much 🩷
How sweet and lovely this musing is! I adore its every sentence imbued with peace and wonder.
Thank you so much! You are so kind!
These require a lot more work. I have to match the Chinese tones as well as balance meaning in specific phrases. It’s not a direct translation. Actually sounds better and means more in the original Chinese. 🩷