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Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

I've been silently binge reading you for a couple of days, completely immersed in your work, and I must say this one made me stop foe a bit.

I have been wanting to write a piece sbout Goodbyes for a while. As a child from divorced parents, an immigrant and citizen of a collapsed country, I've had many goodbyes in my life. Too many.

Goodbye to my country. Goodbye to my family. Goodbye to my friends. Goodbye to my life time and time again.

Bottom line is, this is beautiful, and it touched me in all sorts of ways. Your writing has a softness that reaches deep and stays with you.

Thank you.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you, truly, thank you for reading my work. Sincerely thank you for this thoughtful and lovely comment. Goodbyes are difficult. Even the ones we expect. My deepest empathy on all of your goodbyes. Way too many. I wish you every good thing, peaceful days, and nights where you sleep undisturbed. Thank you again for saying my writing has a softness that reaches deep and stays with you. That is one of the best compliments I’ve ever had. I hope someone will give you a little sparkle of joy today like you have given me. 🩷

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Your writing already did! 💜

Alicia's avatar

Grieving the what if as well as the what is. That really spoke to me.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you. I’m sorry it resonated so much. Very painful place to be.

Alicia's avatar

It is, but seeing the reflection in other people’s words and feelings actually helps tremendously. Solidarity. ❤️

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Solidarity 🩷🙌🏼

James (HVR)'s avatar

I grieve the living more than the dead. The versions I knew.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Same I feel that!

Belinda Drakes's avatar

Some goodbyes do not slam the door. They linger like steam above an untouched teacup, soft and haunting, asking us to grieve not only what was, but what almost bloomed. Your words feel like standing in a quiet garden after rain, realizing even the flowers understand loss

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you for this lovely comment. I could not agree more.

Priya Hinduja's avatar

Very true and very relatable! Well written!

Mark ✌️💙🫂's avatar

So very heartfelt and beautiful.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you Mark.

AsukaHotaru's avatar

The goodbye that happens while someone is still here... I just went really careful inside, like even breathing too loud near that thought..? Would be too much...

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Yes it’s very painful, especially when you still want to reach out and touch them in some way. Communicate, hug, laugh. We honestly never talk about the people we love that we have to let go because it’s the best thing for us.

I always seem to kind of sweep that under the rock. Because truly they are still here their energy is still all around you just have to block it out.

Ashu singh's avatar

Hauntingly beautiful!

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you so much!

Marwa Mabrouk's avatar

This hit very deep, it's real grief... 💔

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Yes it’s the most painful thing we experience, loss and grief.

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

Heartbreakingly beautiful! 🥰💔🥲

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you so much! 🩷