That question—“How long are we going to live love?”—changed the whole poem for me. It reaches someone who has already decided they are broken and quietly asks them to imagine a shared future instead. “My gravity was his name” is such a beautiful moment of surrender: not disappearing into another person, but finally allowing love to give the world weight again.
We could test this on an app transcode I want to do. If you isolate the song and then Run it through chordify or elsewhere you’d get the notes to play it, and then me or my mom could play it, or quantum quill! I loved this!
It was lovely! That’s the great thing about music. It can take a word salad (You do NOT write word salads. I just like it for my illustration) and turn it into a hearty stew. ☺️
Good evening, Dorie. Gravity is invisible, but it is definitely a force that supports us. I loved how that invisible force became a metaphor for love and the bond between people. It felt so natural. 😇
You let the brokenness speak first, then let his question become your gravity, not rescue, but something steadier. The floor turning to water and finally having a name feels so true. Thank you for writing it with such care. It stayed with me. ✨🙏🏻
I have my irks with Suno but when I write something that sounds more like a song lyric its great to bring that idea to life, and make something uniquely yours. From your words... ✍️🏾✍️🏾✍️🏾
Beautiful! I love suno actually but it does take a while sometimes to get the right tune... It can be pretty frustrating. In case you didn't know, you can download songs to your phone and then directly post them here
That question—“How long are we going to live love?”—changed the whole poem for me. It reaches someone who has already decided they are broken and quietly asks them to imagine a shared future instead. “My gravity was his name” is such a beautiful moment of surrender: not disappearing into another person, but finally allowing love to give the world weight again.
Yes exactly yes thank you.
Oh my goodness! ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
We could test this on an app transcode I want to do. If you isolate the song and then Run it through chordify or elsewhere you’d get the notes to play it, and then me or my mom could play it, or quantum quill! I loved this!
Yes please
@Ilias Shepherd Marrow
Miss @Dorie Snow/雪多丽 ….
Oh !!!! @Viv Chen This will mean everything to us @Dorie Snow/雪多丽 n @Ilias Shepherd Marrow both say yes! Please sir!
Beautiful~ woven in a red thread of love
And the name~
Always an anchor ⚓️ that can be counted on to hold, and hold onto. Bless you both💞❤️🔥
Thank you so much!
Thank you!
Well-done! 💛 This line is so concrete and deep: To be the hard, perfect light in a sapphire, There’s so much to unravel in it…
Thank you so much! This one was a bit of a dream, a bit of reality, and a bit of future promises. Something about blue diamonds and flower gardens.
It was lovely! That’s the great thing about music. It can take a word salad (You do NOT write word salads. I just like it for my illustration) and turn it into a hearty stew. ☺️
Yes exactly!
Good evening, Dorie. Gravity is invisible, but it is definitely a force that supports us. I loved how that invisible force became a metaphor for love and the bond between people. It felt so natural. 😇
Thank you so much! Creating this song was a gift of love.
Falling up.
Thank you so much
Dorie, this is such a generous poem.
You let the brokenness speak first, then let his question become your gravity, not rescue, but something steadier. The floor turning to water and finally having a name feels so true. Thank you for writing it with such care. It stayed with me. ✨🙏🏻
Thank you so much. I appreciate you and this lovely compliment.
I think it's a gorgeous song, Dorie. ❤️
Thank you Alicia! 🩷
I have my irks with Suno but when I write something that sounds more like a song lyric its great to bring that idea to life, and make something uniquely yours. From your words... ✍️🏾✍️🏾✍️🏾
Beautiful words and lyrics, Dorie. I enjoyed that.
Thank you Gary!
Beautiful! I love suno actually but it does take a while sometimes to get the right tune... It can be pretty frustrating. In case you didn't know, you can download songs to your phone and then directly post them here
I didn’t know! I will try