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Nicole's avatar

He must have needed a positive thought in his life today.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Truly. I think so too.

Leo thee Lemon's avatar

You make it sound so beautiful.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Regret can be beautiful

Saif's avatar

Familiar feeling. Never thought to capture it. Well written and you captured that feeling of nostalgia well.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you Saif, that means a lot to me.

The Mad Widow's avatar

Short but sweet

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you for reading 🩷

Tammy B's avatar

Definitely resonating!❤️‍🩹❤️

Andrea Thorfinson's avatar

Soft, nostalgic, and full of grace. Beautifully written.

AsukaHotaru's avatar

Dorie, you just made me whisper a name I absolutely did not intend to summon today.

Your poem has that ‘oops-my-heart-remembered-before-my-brain-did’ energy.

Soft, sneaky, and now I’m side-eyeing my own memories like… who invited you back?

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Yes! Exactly this!

Dawnithic's avatar

His image floated before my eyes,

I closed them to hold it in.

I thought of every moment we shared,

how blessed I have been.

You told the whole story in those four lines. Brilliant.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you for your beautiful compliment. I appreciate you very much.

Dawnithic's avatar

Thank you too.

Storm Whisperer's avatar

Beautiful, I saw him too. ❤️ Thank you x