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Gary L Taylor's avatar

Wonderfully written. It really makes you feel as if you are there and a part of their lives.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you Gary! I love these two so much.

AsukaHotaru's avatar

Oh noooo Mary saying I wanted you and I still want to work with you..?? So softtt I actually had to stop a sec from reading. And then Carly at the door knowing there was still something there, please..! I am over here a little wrecked cuz that ache is doing things to me. 🥴

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

I feel that. The next chapter is posting later today.

Leonorra Dainler's avatar

I really felt for Carly ! You really evoked personal past memories of beings passed over and how that can sting. Thank you for this. So glad to have connected with this story and you .

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you so much. It’s important to me that real feelings process through. Even the things we take as simple can have such huge impacts on our lives. If we could have just one person, just one say “I hear you, I see you, let’s try a different way since plan A didn’t work. Or I won’t give up on you.” We’d be so much better.

Leonorra Dainler's avatar

Exactly! The simple acknowledgment of another person’s feelings can go some way to alleviating the hurt .