Personal Poetry
I really can’t top what Mark said, he captured it so perfectly. This one hits deep.
Thank you for reading! 🩷
Hi Doris,
Four words came to mind
Small poem, big ache.
It hits that moment where you feel someone leaving long before they say a word.
Thankyou!
Thank you so much for reading and for commenting. I really appreciate your feedback. I like what you said it is definitely a small poem, but a very big ache.
Very succinct writing. Feels like the end of something and the associated sadness, that you've worded and made into something poetic.
Thank you so much. I appreciate you reading and commenting!
This was good...Ramones style with plenty of substance 🤌🏽
Thank you! I love the Ramones! My son when he was a baby.🩷 thank you for reminding me of this wonderful memory.
A very concise expression of hurt and the pain of a relationship that's unraveling
Thank you for reading. Yes, you understood it.
I really can’t top what Mark said, he captured it so perfectly. This one hits deep.
Thank you for reading! 🩷
Hi Doris,
Four words came to mind
Small poem, big ache.
It hits that moment where you feel someone leaving long before they say a word.
Thankyou!
Thank you so much for reading and for commenting. I really appreciate your feedback. I like what you said it is definitely a small poem, but a very big ache.
Very succinct writing. Feels like the end of something and the associated sadness, that you've worded and made into something poetic.
Thank you so much. I appreciate you reading and commenting!
This was good...Ramones style with plenty of substance 🤌🏽
Thank you! I love the Ramones! My son when he was a baby.🩷 thank you for reminding me of this wonderful memory.
A very concise expression of hurt and the pain of a relationship that's unraveling
Thank you for reading. Yes, you understood it.