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Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Love this Dorie!

I felt fully immersed into 1920's elegance with a hint of noir.

The sensory and visual details are so vivid and through me straight into what feels like a cinematic piece!

Beautiful writing and can't wait for the next episode and to see more of Tens!

Great name BTW- a name that feels like it has a whole back story in itself.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Tens has a full backstory. You don’t get a nickname like that unless you earned it.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

hehe! Can’t wait!

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

You are so cheeky! 🤭

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you! And thank you for all of your help getting this ready🩷 I could not have done it without you!

Leonorra Dainler's avatar

This felt as if I was transported back to that era . It seems like eons ago and , yet, it’s in living memory. So strange how time moves on and washes away the traditions of the past . Thank you for sharing. I really enjoyed reading your post.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you so much!

AsukaHotaru's avatar

The half-poured Scotch is such a nasty little witness, I swear..!

Alicia's avatar

I'm hooked!

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

I’m glad! I had a good time with this series.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

This is truly stunning. So deeply immersive! Excited to read more 💜

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you so much!

Gary L Taylor's avatar

I really loved that Dorie. A real feeling of the period, with a darkness, sensuality and intrigue woven within.

Really looking forward to the next part.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you so much Gary! It was an interesting look back into American wealth disparity before and during the Great Depression. It started with a book that I’ve loved for many years. Led me down a little rabbit hole of American history.

Andrea Thorfinson's avatar

Really loved this, Dorie. It felt very cinematic and dreamlike to me, almost like an old black-and-white film playing out on a moving train. I could totally feel William getting more and more caught up in the mystery of her. Beautifully done!