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Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Truly beautiful Dorie!

Stunning. The words and images perfectly in tune with each other.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you Mark! I’ve been going back to being true to myself, taking my walks and looking for flowers. These are the flowers on my street.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

A little gentle nature inspiration. Beautiful 😍

Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Wow I loved this! So visual!

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

I’m so glad thank you!

Seungyeon Jeong's avatar

Your poem made me think: when the heart is wounded, blood can veil the eyes, and the world changes again.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Yes precisely so. If you have a blocked qi, all of your senses are dulled and struggling.

Josh's avatar

Very lovely, Dorie ♥️

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you Josh 🩷

Leo thee Lemon's avatar

I miss seeing flowers

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Soon! Spring is right around the corner

Leo thee Lemon's avatar

We still are getting more snow

Leo thee Lemon's avatar

Apparently we are getting a winter storm in march.

Alicia's avatar

Very cool. I liked how you matched the poems to the flowers.

Claire Cayson's avatar

Oh Dorie left eye tears so beautiful love Claire

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

Really amazing poems and I love these three different atmospheres! 🥰 That is a cool coincidence, since one of my first posts here was a (from my perspective) very similar one: https://fragmentsandthedark.substack.com/p/the-location-one-place-three-moods 😁

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Thank you very much. I will look at your post. My flowers are from my street.

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

They are so beautiful! 😁

Sabrina Taylor's avatar

I really love this one. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing.

AsukaHotaru's avatar

“Vision blurred by tears” just punched a clean hole through me. It’s so plain, so small, and it still drags the whole room darker in one breath. I sat there a second like… yeah. That’s exactly how it happens.