That's such a tender poem — the image of the world slowing to "only moments spent together" after all that aimless muttering really lands. And the line about him kneeling until the clouds pass, refusing to let you cry alone — that's such a quiet, powerful way to describe being truly cared for. Carried with care!
Thank you so much! He truly has become the center of my world. I think honestly, my poetry doesn’t even touch the surface of being truly cherished by someone. I will consistently fail at it, but I will keep trying. Who knows maybe one day he will stop making me speechless, so I can put it on paper properly. Thank you for your wonderful compliment. You made my day! 🩷
Park lemonade has no business being this important. Then came the chest made just for you, and someone kneeling until the weather in your face clears... I don’t know, it makes love look like a place where even tears get company. I’d trade quite a lot for one afternoon like that.
Yeah I can give little surprises here and there. Still waters run deep kinda thing. If it helps I still wear aprons and call everyone sweetheart or love bug.
A beautiful thing to be in love.
Yes truly it is
Love, found.
Something found, something lost -
yet I am here.
Oh, now I am here,
you holding me.
So beautiful, Dorie! I love this. Can feel the love right through your words.💚 So happy!
Thank you Thorn 🩷
This is absolutely beautiful. You captured that feeling of finding the person who makes the whole world slow down. ❤️
Thank you Andrea 🩷
A beautiful, powerful and pure Love Poem 💕 Thank you for sharing!
Thank you Nina! 🩷
love how you expressed
this feeling
Thank you so much!
Ahhhh that gentle bobbing of the boat as it sways effortlessly in line with the docking pier… fabulous Dorie❤️🔥
Thank you so much Miles! 🩷
Yes ma’am !! 🦎✅💎
That's such a tender poem — the image of the world slowing to "only moments spent together" after all that aimless muttering really lands. And the line about him kneeling until the clouds pass, refusing to let you cry alone — that's such a quiet, powerful way to describe being truly cared for. Carried with care!
Thank you so much! He truly has become the center of my world. I think honestly, my poetry doesn’t even touch the surface of being truly cherished by someone. I will consistently fail at it, but I will keep trying. Who knows maybe one day he will stop making me speechless, so I can put it on paper properly. Thank you for your wonderful compliment. You made my day! 🩷
Well-deserved Dorie! You are welcome!
You describe being in love so beautifully. Love the imagery! <3
Like no other feeling.
Park lemonade has no business being this important. Then came the chest made just for you, and someone kneeling until the weather in your face clears... I don’t know, it makes love look like a place where even tears get company. I’d trade quite a lot for one afternoon like that.
Yes the tears get company. It’s so special.
Wonderful and full of love.
Hi, Dorie. This brought back some memories. I felt like this a few times when I was younger. So nostalgic. 💖😇
Thank you 🩷
The “strangle my throat” came out left field …was not expecting that lol
Yeah I can give little surprises here and there. Still waters run deep kinda thing. If it helps I still wear aprons and call everyone sweetheart or love bug.