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AsukaHotaru's avatar

Your poem feels like someone sneaking in to gently tidy the chaos in my head — feather-light, but somehow bossy in the sweetest way. I swear the ‘sleep, sleep, sleep’ line almost had me tucking myself in like a scolded cat. This one hums with the kind of peace we forget we’re allowed~

Andrea Thorfinson's avatar

This was so beautiful, Dorie. Thank you for this moment of calm.

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