Your poem feels like someone sneaking in to gently tidy the chaos in my head — feather-light, but somehow bossy in the sweetest way. I swear the ‘sleep, sleep, sleep’ line almost had me tucking myself in like a scolded cat. This one hums with the kind of peace we forget we’re allowed~
Thank you @PancakeSushi for reading and your continued support. I am so grateful for you. Especially feedback coming from a talented poet like yourself.🩷
Your poem feels like someone sneaking in to gently tidy the chaos in my head — feather-light, but somehow bossy in the sweetest way. I swear the ‘sleep, sleep, sleep’ line almost had me tucking myself in like a scolded cat. This one hums with the kind of peace we forget we’re allowed~
This was so beautiful, Dorie. Thank you for this moment of calm.
Thank you! You know how I’m feeling and you show me the most gentle kindness. I appreciate you more than I can express.
I feel like I should say this to myself a lot.
I find myself saying it more often lately. Then I say ok brain this is not helpful let’s move on.
A beautiful personal mantra I'll have to copy. An overactive mind is a curse
Thank you @PancakeSushi for reading and your continued support. I am so grateful for you. Especially feedback coming from a talented poet like yourself.🩷
I loved this!