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I saw it land

wet and coming apart at the corners,

still holding its shape

but barely.

I don't know how to give it back.

I don't know if you'd want it back,

ruined like this,

or if you're already gone,

building something new

with steadier hands.

All I know is

I'm standing here with someone else's sorrow

and it feels too heavy

for something made of paper.

The wind keeps blowing.

I keep thinking about that child,

how she must have watched it go,

reaching after nothing.

I do that too sometimes

reach for things already lost,

pretend my fingers might close

around air and memory

and call it enough.

Maybe we're all just

letting go of our careful work,

watching it scatter,

wondering if anyone will find the pieces

and understand

what we were trying to make.

Andrea Thorfinson's avatar

Fragile peace, folded with care. There’s so much tenderness and lived history in these few lines. And I agree with Asuka, that last line...

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