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Dawnithic's avatar

Dorie, your poem exposes betrayal with stark honesty...words deceive, actions reveal. The discarded light symbolizes what was truly valuable, and the ending asks a simple, powerful question... “No more?”... marking the boundary between endurance and self-respect. I truly love this question.

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This one... hit deep.

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