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Dawnithic's avatar

Dorie, your poem exposes betrayal with stark honesty...words deceive, actions reveal. The discarded light symbolizes what was truly valuable, and the ending asks a simple, powerful question... “No more?”... marking the boundary between endurance and self-respect. I truly love this question.

Andrea Thorfinson's avatar

This one... hit deep.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

I’m so sorry it did. 😢

Andrea Thorfinson's avatar

It’s okay. I’m “mostly” healed from my experience.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Do we ever really heal? It’s a hole in my heart I think that honestly, doesn’t go away, even after the relationship has ended

Andrea Thorfinson's avatar

I'll share my story in a text. 💛